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Pearls On Parchment

Although I've never kept fanciful fountain pens close at hand, I have found no need for flamboyant quills to dip into a well, for poetic lines never heed my beck and call or my command. Sometimes I'm a barren poet, thirsting for words in a dry spell. I have found no need for flamboyant quills to dip into a well. My ink spills are splatters that mingle with my lifeblood. Sometimes I'm a barren poet, thirsting for words in a dry spell, waiting for them to flow like rain begets spring flowers to bud. My ink spills are splatters that mingle with my lifeblood, until poetic thoughts invade the effusive chambers of my heart, waiting for them to flow like rain begets spring flowers to bud. But when verses rhyme, my poems are expressive works of art. Until poetic thoughts invade the effusive chambers of my heart, no laureate wreath am I fit to wear if I view my poetry as jaded. But when verses rhyme, my poems are expressive works of art. I must write pearls on parchment, jewels sewn on silk, brocaded. No laureate wreath am I fit to wear if I view my poetry as jaded, for poetic lines never heed my beck and call or my command. I must write pearls on parchment, jewels sewn on silk, brocaded, although I've never kept fanciful fountain pens close at hand. November 27, 2022 ~ Pantoum on Writing Poetry Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins

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Date: 11/27/2022 5:22:00 PM
Superb write, Jenna. This form is tricky actually, since the repeating lines need to make sense ~ you did a brilliant job, best of luck in the contest
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/27/2022 6:11:00 PM
It took quite a bit of editing to make it coherent, Seeker. Thank you so very much for liking it.
Date: 11/27/2022 4:44:00 PM
I must write pearl's on parchment Mission accomplished then I think you just did Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/27/2022 6:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Christopher.
Date: 11/27/2022 11:02:00 AM
Brilliant pantoum Jenna, have only written two and struggled with them, not my favourite form. Certainly no sign of a dry spell here. Your quill is on fire. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/27/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. This one was a second effort. I got so annoyed with my first idea that I scrapped it.
Date: 11/27/2022 8:13:00 AM
wow--not an easy form to produce an "expressive work of art." Luxurious words worthy of such an elegant form, rich with meaning... beautiful.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/27/2022 8:52:00 AM
A Pantoum can be a challenge, Steven. I'm glad you enjoyed my lines, and I sincerely appreciate your kind comments.

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