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Peachy Whirls

Oh, such amorous flamenco A bailaora who whirls fervidly Nascent paltriness, a winged coo Unruffled yet sways seamlessly To grasp is to grin and bear it To ace is quite an arduous drill To master is to act with grit And delectate the peachy whirl One oblique pennant of breath Suchlike to humane multitude Defiance from old shibboleth A vagueness of life’s certitude 09.23.17

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Date: 9/26/2017 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations Moon Flower on your #1 placement with this great write! :)
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/28/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 9/26/2017 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations Moon Flower :)
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/28/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 9/26/2017 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Moon Flower
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/28/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 9/26/2017 12:48:00 PM
Moon, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/28/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you, BW!
Date: 9/26/2017 9:31:00 AM
Terrific write Moon Flower, a most deserving win, congratulations...
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/26/2017 11:51:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie.
Date: 9/26/2017 7:54:00 AM
Nice win! Congrats, Moon Flower!
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/26/2017 11:51:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 9/26/2017 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. Closing stanza is especially striking to me. "A vagueness of life's certitude." Yes, I too have pondered this long and deep.
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/26/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Robert.
Date: 9/26/2017 7:03:00 AM
A lovely title, fitting for the poem.. Great use of language and the poem is really beautiful, the last stanza my favourite.. Congratulations on first place in the contest..
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Moon Flower
Date: 9/26/2017 11:53:00 AM
I'm so honored...

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