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Peaceful Place

wrap me in threads of moonlit grass just for this single waning eve though blossoms rest on quiet waves I feel split from the halves of earth as wickers of fear grate me within-- then come for me; be the thread... and as night becomes my morning blue silver if only to taste this light in soft of hours and touch the kaleidoscope of my eyes when all this grating phobia vanishes; then let morning thrill upon evening on its limitless, seamless fearless place. Debbie Guzzi's Fear Contest 2012 and Brian's Any 2012 Poem By nette onclaud

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Date: 2/23/2012 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2012 Poem" contest *Nette*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win! I'm glad I got to read this one again. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:53:00 PM
nette, congrats...in Brian's contest...pd
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:29:00 PM
wow, way to go with this BIG win, nette. and I see Debs gave ya a win too. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 2/22/2012 6:42:00 PM
Hey Nette..You painted your fears with excellence..the image of a room at the beginning was superb...followed by how your mind races with fear of car wrecks...I too have lost friends like this and it still evokes fear and panic in my mind...A strong and encouraging ending filled with "glowing peace." This was a winner from the start!! Congrats darling! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/22/2012 5:13:00 PM
Well done and happy winning. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:22:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on an outstanding win for a superb poem .so intense ..so succulent sweet.. soup mail...
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Debbie Guzzi's "Fear" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2012 6:44:00 PM
Nette, awesome write. Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest........................... S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/12/2012 1:55:00 AM
NETTE , congratulations... with your wonderful win In Debbie's contest.. enjoyed your poem. have yourself a wonderful valentines~ always* xox~PD
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Date: 2/12/2012 12:34:00 AM
a great superebly crafted one... congrats
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:10:00 PM
congrats Nette luv.. a vibrant win for a dynamite write my friend.. amazing as ever ..are u..
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Date: 2/11/2012 10:24:00 AM
This is really great,Nette.Many many congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations Please forgive the cut and paste congratuations I must do today it does not diminsh the feeling behind the congratulations or the quality of the work presented. mum not well need to go out xx
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win! This powerful poem is going into my faves. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:19:00 PM
All to familiar are the emotions in this write I have often wished we were closer geographically![a wicker of fear wrestles] great phrasing! Big Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a great placement in the contest. Jon
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Date: 2/9/2012 10:20:00 PM
Fear but leading to peace in the end!! Good depiction of that little "panic" room inside us all!
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Date: 2/9/2012 2:46:00 PM
What a beautiful piece, Nette. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 2/9/2012 8:50:00 AM
This is such a wonderful take on fear, nette! I really like how you say trust can bring an end to fear (tama ba ako?)-- so true! And thanks for passing by my poems and congrats on all your wins!! hugs!
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Date: 2/9/2012 8:14:00 AM
Nette, breathtaking imagery, speaks to me on a personal level, too. I LOVED the second to last line. I also thought "wicker of fear" was fab, all that weaving, tight and strong... good image!
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Date: 2/9/2012 6:52:00 AM
This write is so poetic Nette ! Its draw to its solving flow very well dear poet ! Wonderful and moving ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james soup-mail in a minute
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Date: 2/9/2012 12:41:00 AM
Very good poem on the contest theme Nette.Everyone can relate to it.Best wishes for the contest.
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