Peaceful Morning

early morning peace... mist hangs tranquil and serene lone bird whistlling ~*~ 02/08/13

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/18/2013 12:16:00 AM

You really payed attention when it comes to making the last line a "u-turn" in the poem. I wish to grab my jacket and take a good long walk in that tranquil mist you speak of :)

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 6:11:00 PM

!!!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 2/9/2013 8:45:00 PM

Awesome, Annalise! I can feel the tranquility :) Great job!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 11:44:00 AM

this is so tranquil a scene. I really enjoy how you did this haiku, Annalise.

Donna Jones

Date: 2/9/2013 11:26:00 AM

Early morning peace...lovely write.....

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2013 8:00:00 AM

lovely Haiku..

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2013 7:46:00 AM

Wow!!Such a beauty here from you Annalise!

... Gigno

Date: 2/8/2013 10:59:00 PM

!!!