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Peace On Earth

P eace lives in the hearts of those who believe E very life is precious, bearing the spirit of light A lleviate pain and hatred wherever it’s perceived C Leave to simple truths often hidden from sight E ven wisemen, at times, fall prey to haughty pride O nly humility can stand against the tide N one is exempt from temptation’s lure E ach one is broken and in need of a cure A ll Children of Light will be accounted for R each for the prize that waits in store T he inspiration of Heaven's breath H earts reflecting genuine peace on earth ~*~ 12/20/11 For Francine's Holiday "Acrostic" Contest

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Date: 12/29/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Annalise! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/28/2011 4:23:00 PM
A.B.- Nicely done...S1L4...very good. ;-)
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts' "Holiday Acrostic Challenge" Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2011 6:57:00 AM
AnnaLise congrats on your win,very well said..David
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Date: 12/25/2011 8:38:00 AM
Well written Annalise. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/24/2011 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations and happy holidays to you, Annalise! Bob
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Date: 12/24/2011 7:31:00 PM
congrats on your Honorable Mention in the contest Annalise, and Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:34:00 AM
Happy Holidays, Annalise. Powerful acrostic and great couplets thru out. A real crowd pleaser! If we really could have peace...oh, what a glorious day it would be! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/23/2011 9:11:00 AM
Beautiful uplifting write, Annalise. Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend - and wishing you a wonderful xmas : )
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Date: 12/21/2011 6:56:00 PM
Annalise, you have the makings of an admirable acrostic poem. However, check your work. You have no line for R in the word "EARTH" How about "R ender them happiness and a sense of worth" for that missing line. Just a suggestion among many possibilities.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/23/2011 8:38:00 PM
Robert, how can I thank you for "having my back"??? I still haven't learned that I cannot not multi task as I am forced to do most times, when it comes to my writing.. Thanks for the suggestion also..I appreciate it very much but chose another line. Much love, Annalise
Date: 12/21/2011 11:37:00 AM
WOOOW!!! Annalise very well written!!! OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/21/2011 4:26:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Anne Lise..Thank you...Wish we would get a little snow for Christmas..at least for us "kids" lol...Have lots of fun! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/21/2011 7:47:00 AM
The best to you in Francine's contest Annalise. (R)Love, Carol
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/21/2011 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Carol. Love, Annalise
Date: 12/20/2011 10:54:00 PM
this is not showing on the contest page, please check and re-enter it
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/21/2011 4:23:00 PM
Thanks! I must have been having one of my "senior" moments, Francine : )
Date: 12/20/2011 10:24:00 PM
This is beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it. Lovely words.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/21/2011 4:31:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Stephanie Thank you and have a Merry Christmas and all the good things you wish for yourself in the coming New Year! Love, Annalise

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