Peace-Offering

My Hopes renewed and doubts subdued, Pray no grief comes soon intrude- May Peace of Mind thus tell me true, "The only one for me is you."

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/25/2013 4:39:00 PM

Chan This is so sweet and full of love and feeling. I can tell the devotion you have for this special someone. Glad you enjoyed my Happen to You poem. Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:58:00 AM

Thanks, sweet pea. It's really not about a person: it's about my perpetual search for peace of mind, so I sort of wrote it from a personification perspective ;)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/20/2013 1:53:00 AM

Cute poem Archaic. Loved it! : )

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/20/2013 6:36:00 PM

You are too kind and wonderful, Mustapha :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/18/2013 11:22:00 AM

Love your poetry... Mine is a series of comedy like poems about the events at Troll Lake... Not spectacular, just fun... Drawn out... a story in each one... When I do serious I usually do deep and dark... My hubby likes the fun ones best... He even helps me pick out the ideas... and to write a few... more for grown up kids... you might say... I could do better... but like the fun! People clamor for them around here... can't wait for the next one... The UPS Guy got one made especially for him.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/19/2013 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for the compliment, Carol. Now that I understand your writing perspective a little better, I shall be able to leave a more informed review. Thanks for enlightening me on your writing process. Hope you are well today :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/17/2013 3:36:00 PM

I agree with yvette and Catie... perfectly penned with sweet emotion. :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/18/2013 6:34:00 AM

lol Thanks, Karen. Every now and again, you'll get a "sweet" one from me, but not too often (it'll ruin my Gloom and Doom cred lol)

Shanity Rain

Date: 9/17/2013 11:55:00 AM

I love this , brilliant ..Having trouble or frustration with my last write ~ not disappointed to read your new poem ~ 7

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/17/2013 12:10:00 PM

lol *HOPE

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/17/2013 12:09:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment, Yvette; I appreciate it so much. Hoe you have a breakthrough with your new piece; I know how frustrating it is to get stuck on a poem or be dissatisfied with it. Here's wishing you well, and thanks again :)