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Peace Love and Gods Greatest Gift

The mellifluous musical tones of the village bells Echoing chimes over the cold snowcapped mountains Both finding their way to people in the valley below Christmas songs—let your spirit sing freely and loudly Welcoming the Birth of Our Savior and Baby King Who so charms the Angels on High and God Himself On this night, The Star was so beautiful, clear, and shiny Crisp and so crystal-bright, centered above and beyond Reflecting now the Lord God’s most divine and holy light There is real magic in the night air as Heaven rejoices aloud The child and the infant’s divine soul breathe life now intently Fulfilling truly God’s very promise and His hope to Mankind Keep this Christmas spirit—share it with others near and far Grace filled with good tidings as we dance on wings of joy We all now celebrate in great happiness, love, and kindness Christmas is forever—and you must never ever close this door Faith always enters, carrying His guiding torch high and proud And encouraging Man every step of the way on his long journey Even in a simple cradle where the Baby Jesus so innocently lay Heaven doth bathe His cradle with the warmest rays of divine light Bespeaking the heavenly beauty, joy, and wonder of Our Savior Amazing peace makes a lovely gift, I wish for all of us to have As new life blossoms, wrapped in petals of an immaculate heart God’s holy blessing, love, and intention are clear for all to see That Holy Night the Angels entire sang mirthfully on Christmas Eve Praising Almighty Lord God in Heaven on the birth of His only son The Angels’ paeans echoed in their divine beauty across the Universe To bring peace now, glowing with your love, is His divine intention Rejoicing in God’s Greatest Gift to Mankind who was born in a manger Destined to become Our Most Holy and Divine Savior—Amen! Amen! Anne-Lise Andresen, Liam McDaid, and Gary Bateman A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved December 1, 2015 (Unrhymed Tercet)

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Date: 12/24/2015 1:27:00 AM
Ok is this really fair? How can one compete when 3 spectacular poets collaborate!!! Impossible I say! None the less knowing you all through your poetry, this, is well beautiful, Sometimes I am simply at a loss for words! Merry Christmas to all!
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:26:00 PM
A most worthy poem befitting this important time of the year! A gift, indeed! A lovely triple collaboration that does all you three credit. ~ Wishing a joyous and blessed Christmas to you and your loved ones! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:45:00 AM
Hi Liam,Gary n' Anne- Lise!This is a most beautiful n' outstanding Christmas poem, that the three of you have painted here,my dearest friends.I truly enjoy it!Just dazzling!Very beautifully written Christmas piece!Just awesome!A most beautiful n sweet write about Christmas and our King and Savior Jesus Christ, after all He Is the reason for this season:))A masterpiece!I just love it!Great imagery!Excellent collaborations guys! Just fabulous!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav! And thank you so much guys, for writing n' sharing this very beautiful Christmas piece:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light! God bless you always!Wishing you a Very Merry Christmas to you n' your dear family and a Very Happy New Year too my dearest friends!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Gary Bateman
Date: 12/19/2015 3:58:00 PM
Hello Dear One "D" -- I saw your note here and I thought I would comment back to you. Liam may comment back later. (I'm officially on a break from PS until February -- as you know, but I told Anne-Lise and Liam I would participate in a re-post of this most wonderful write.) Thanks as always for your wonderfully supporting comments and for the "TR"/"FAV"!! Ingrid and I wish you all the best for Christmas and the New Year!! Best Always, Gary (XO!! XO!! XO!!)
Date: 12/19/2015 7:06:00 AM
- Finally ..... this I have been waiting for - a poem that has been at the first place for several weeks now !!! - A truly beautiful Christmas poems !!! - Without Liam and Gary, this poem would NEVER "been born"!!!! - A big thank you to my wonderful friends - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 12/19/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!! Liam, I see, did do his post here of our mutually-shared Christmas poem. (I asked him to please do this last night.) I can truthfully say that I think this is one of the best collaborated efforts that all three of us have worked on together. It turned out extraordinarily well. The fact it was rated "Number One" is, indeed, truly fabulous!!) I will do my post of it on either Christmas Eve or Christmas Day. It's worth getting it out there again so people who didn't notice it or didn't have a chance to read it, can certainly do so!! A big thank you to both you and Liam on helping to make this wonderful effort happen!! Merry Christmas!! Gary

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