Get Your Premium Membership

Peace In Action

Police lady kneels in prayer for peace* against echoing bombshells Babe sleeps midst quietude inside mother’s womb.
*Philippians 4:7 ...The peace of God, which passeth all understanding, shall keep your hearts and minds through Christ Jesus. March 28, 2023 3RD PLACE, "Write BANTUs" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Suzanne Delaney; judged on 4/6/2023 "Two-line Bantu (or Abantu) poetry developed from the Bantu people of Africa (speakers of the Swahili, Kinyarwand, Kirundi, Zulu, Xhosa and other related languages). It arose from the oral tradition of “call and response.” In the rhythm of their work and perhaps in the spirit of a game or to relieve boredom, people would call out to each other. The first speaker called out a line that contained an image. A second speaker replied using a second image. This second image was meant to function as an elaboration or metaphor of the first."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/8/2023 9:45:00 AM
Peace...if only. Congratulations on your win Beata! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2023 9:24:00 AM
quite the contrast . Congrats for the win
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2023 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata, on your win with this thought provoking poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/6/2023 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Kabayan, on this win. Beautiful mix of contrasting images.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/6/2023 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Beata:) Very nice!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2023 12:49:00 AM
Beautiful images, Beata:)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2023 7:41:00 AM
- Well done, Beata :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs