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Peace For Troubled Hearts

As I hang the shining “Star of Bethlehem” atop my Christmas tree I recall with joy, the greatest miracle there was to be Two thousand years have passed since; yet, truth still holds And for me it is not some old folklore; or some legend of old There is a mighty king who willingly gave up his crown Donning mortality, he, "love unconditional", came down Pure love, accompanied by a peace, meant for every man His words and example were the seeds to plant. I still believe in miracles even when others can’t digest I wish for a miracle today in the deafening halls of Congress That by some magic, they could walk in the peoples’ shoes Feel the alarming fear of young and old; and I pray they’d choose- Peace for troubled hearts and all Relief for hurting people with backs against the wall ~*~
Note: For "Your Christmas Miracle" Contest Sponsored by Carolyn 2nd Place

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Date: 12/14/2011 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your entry being chosen among the winners. This is an impressive write.
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Date: 12/14/2011 3:36:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:59:00 AM
Yes pray for out leaders that they might see the needs of other less fortunate, Annalise. Love unconditional is the only answer to the human dilemma. Congrats on your worthy poem win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/13/2011 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful write here Annalise.Congrats on your win.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/13/2011 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Kash.
Date: 12/13/2011 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in the "Your Christmas Miracle" contest Annalise. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Carol! Much love and blessings to you, too! Annalise
Date: 12/13/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations lovely x
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/13/2011 4:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Mandy! Merry Christmas! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/13/2011 9:57:00 AM
If members of Congress had to walk in our shoes, I do believe this would be a better world filled with love and peace. I hope your miracle is fulfilled, Annalise. A beautiful write. Congratulations on your second-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/13/2011 4:27:00 PM
I truly believe that Carolyn. Thank you for the honor! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/9/2011 10:49:00 PM
* "TIS ALWAYS MAKES MY HEART JOYFUL WHENEVER I THINK OF BETHLEHEM, MARY & JOSEPH, THE STARS IN HEAVEN & BABY JESUS * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL ANNALISE * HAVE I TOLD YOUR FRAGRANT BEAUTY * HOW VERY MUCH I ADORE YOUR PRECIOUS NAME * I SAY FRAGRANT BECAUSE YOUR BEAUTIFUL HEART SEEMS SOOO VERY LOVING * YOUR BEAUTIES FAITH & COMPASSION ARE QUITE ADMIRABLE * BEAUTIFUL PAINTING AMID EVERY LIGHT * TWAS A JOY YOUR LOVELY VISIT * THANK YOU & HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:06:00 AM
good luck in Carolyn contest with this wonderful poem. harry
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 4:49:00 PM
Hi Harry. Thanks for your kind comment. Hope all is well. Annalise
Date: 12/7/2011 8:42:00 AM
Great poetry, I love the flow and rhyme scheme you chose, and by some miracle I do think we will soon have peace for troubled hearts.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 4:54:00 PM
Tim B, I'm glad you like this. We could all benefit from some peace within Congress's walls....long overdue... Thank you for reading it and leaving your kind comment. Annalise
Date: 12/7/2011 7:00:00 AM
AMEN! We have to believe! I love it! Thanks for the comments on my poem! Laura
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 4:58:00 PM
Yes! We have no other option, but to hope. And we pray that families adapt to changes in lifestyle and find some joy in being together. Thank you for reading this, Laura! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/6/2011 2:56:00 PM
This is a superb write, Annalise. Yes it would be a miracle if the Congressmen realize the dreams and aspirations of the people. The poem is a winner. Thanks for your most precious comments on my poem I Love You. I am thrilled -Mohammad
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Mohammad. And yes, it would be some miracle...it's the optimist in me, dreaming "Big" as usual. lol Love, Annalise
Date: 12/6/2011 2:31:00 PM
I like it,supert..... Good luck !!!!! OXOX Anne-Lise
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 5:03:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise...Thank you for the kind wish! Have a great weekend! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/6/2011 4:50:00 AM
I believe in miracles too Annalise. Your poem is really wonderful.I like your miracle. I have added you as a fav poet today.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 5:07:00 PM
Hi Broken Butterfly...Thank you for your kindness. Yes, miracles do happen every day! And this would benefit everyone living on these shores and beyond...who knows it may have a rippling effect worldwide! Have a great weekend! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/5/2011 9:43:00 PM
YES YES YES. This would be my wish too, for an amazing miracle!!
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Date: 12/5/2011 9:12:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Keep believing. Have a miraculous Christmas and a Happy New Year.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 5:09:00 PM
Thank you for the kind wishes, Vince..And I will keep believing...I have no choice. Have a wonderful, miraculous Christmas and a Happy New Year filled with rich blessings for you and the family! Love, Annalise
Date: 12/5/2011 8:55:00 PM
I am totally with you on this Annalise.. A write from the heart, wishing you the best for Carolyn's contest ;) love Wilma
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/8/2011 4:48:00 PM
Hey Wilma! Glad you like this. Thanks for reading and leaving your kind comment. Have missed you also! Love, Annalise

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