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When all the great songs have already been sung and every last bell has finally rung I pray it is then when our hope from above shall descend to the Earth like the gentlest dove When every last page has been written in pen by the wisest of sages and the meekest of men And they close up the books with the very last line Perhaps we will give our Creator some time When there is no turning to the left or the right And we must look up lest we lose the fight May the swords we are holding be removed from our hands Let the bloodshed be done with and the armies disband When men are just men and not colors or flags with no more distinction from riches to rags May we then come together as brothers in blood as we pull one another up out of the mud With never a battle to be lost or won Nothing more to be proven under the sun Let the light of God's love all our hearts overtake and our differences fade for humanity's sake When all chatter and clatter distractions are still by dint of the Almighty's sovereign will And all the grand deeds of industry cease Perhaps then this world shall finally know peace © Mike Wise 1-19-23

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Date: 2/15/2023 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/15/2023 11:34:00 AM
Thank u very much Sara! :)
Date: 2/13/2023 2:11:00 PM
Michael, congratulations on your top win with this elegant poem. Indeed, we process toward peace not only as an individual but as a nation and a world. Blessings of peace to you.
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/13/2023 2:16:00 PM
And to you as well, Sam. Thank u! :)
Date: 2/13/2023 5:08:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts, beautifully expressed! Congratulations for winning top honors, Michael! ...Fran
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/13/2023 5:13:00 AM
Thank u very much Francis! :)
Date: 2/12/2023 11:40:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. I am delighted by these lines: "Let the light of God's love all our hearts overtake and our differences fade for humanity's sake." God bless you.
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/13/2023 4:03:00 AM
Thank u Beata! I'm very humbled by your kind words! :)
Date: 2/12/2023 8:54:00 PM
Congrats, Michael, on your top placement. Better yet, thanks for sharing this great poem. I look forward to and anticipate the things of which you speak. The Lord will have the last word. Blessings.
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/13/2023 4:03:00 AM
Amen, and AMEN! Thank u! :)
Date: 2/12/2023 7:20:00 PM
Beautiful! A well deserved winner! Wonderful subject matter and rhyme flow :)
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/13/2023 4:03:00 AM
Many thanks Julie! :)
Date: 2/12/2023 7:20:00 PM
Perhaps, beautifully written, Mike, congratulations:)
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/13/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank u Jo! :)
Date: 2/12/2023 2:00:00 PM
Michael, this wonderful poem--which moved me deeply--is SO deserving of first place. CONGRATS! Janice
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/12/2023 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Janice! I'm honored!
Date: 2/12/2023 1:07:00 PM
Dear Mike, your prayerful poem is beautifully inspiring. Your expressive verse touches my soul deeply. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Michael Wise
Date: 2/12/2023 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so much! I was as much surprised by the win as honored! :)
Date: 1/20/2023 3:58:00 PM
Oh for it to truly be...well penned sentiments and hope for peace.
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/20/2023 7:21:00 PM
Thank u very much M.L. :)

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