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Peace

Amidst the chaos peace descended. It calmed the waves and quieted the storm. It wafted like a breeze, cleansing the air, and settled like a butterfly with gossamer wing. Just when it seemed that the world was ending it slipped quietly in. Sitting at the back; listening but saying nothing. Silent, waiting for the moment to 'attack'. It watched and waited as the fighting continued. Almost interrupting, but held in check. When the arm lifted the sword to strike the deciding blow, it whispered 'stop', and the weapon wavered in the warring hand before it fell and clattered to the floor. Peace spoke then: 'look what you've done with your hatred and cruelty. Do you think you won? Look at the destruction, the devastated souls, and the misery you have caused. I've been watching and waiting for you to come to your senses, but you never did. Not content until the world creaked and cracked under the strain, until all that remained was hopelessness. Well, I'm here now and I order you to stop.' Amidst the chaos peace has descended. War and hate have ended.

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Date: 12/6/2008 11:28:00 PM
A unique look at peace. '...the weapon wavered in the warring hand,' ...excellent alliteration! Marvelous phrasing and imagery. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 8/25/2008 9:13:00 AM
Helen, that is certainly what will happen, peace will prevail very shortly forever and always, everything in Jehovah God's due time not ours, because he desires all to attain to repentance, so he gives us all a chance great write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/2/2008 7:12:00 PM
Dear Helen, I pray this inspirational possitive poem comes to pass. Great writing. Love, lainie thank you for your kind comments on my poetry.
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Date: 7/29/2008 3:27:00 PM
Well written poem Helen - I loved the message of peace - wouldn't be nice if everybody just got along and shared what they didn't need with those who have nothing - I mean there is plenty to go around but rather than give it away mankind chooses to throw it away - Enjoyed your poem - God Bless
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