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Pawns of Love

Across my bubbly cheeks your thoughts were warm like an arid wind, being exhaled out of youthful necessity from the core of Mother Earth And all days’ aches gone into a fourteen lines of gold as the morning rises up But then-- it seemed, as if you were eager to hear the sound of deafening silence when I offered you my apple heart And why was I so eager to share the paradigm of my being when I felt that you were not ready to become my concluding couplet of a Shakespearean sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2009 12:39:00 PM
I'm getting mad at me...I just am not getting your verses.. I think I should? I want to..yet don't want say..what I seem to feel? Light & Love Debbie..they're like popcorn I'll try one more perhaps I'll get one with salt & butter?
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Date: 2/18/2009 12:06:00 PM
Wow, this is a gorgeous poem. I love all the imagery! Especially the "apple heart"... is that a reference to the apple before the fall? The forbidden fruit? Thanks for commenting on my poem!
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