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''Paw of the Panther''

Eyes aglow,I roam without fear. Ears pierced,a vibrating sound. Claws emerge a subtle grip of ground. Like a ghost in the night. I am rarely seen. Scoping the plain,checking the scene. Smart and sleek. I can hold my own. Tempered set,I work alone. Enemies exist. They rapture me not. Never will you catch me move lacking a plot. ''If I Was An Animal What Would I Be Contest?'' written by...Kacey Greenlee kaceymike29

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Kacey. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 10:11:00 PM
A panther..ROAR!!!!!! The words smart and sleek, tempered and working alone. This is so well done. Scoping the plain, checking the scene describes the panther to the T! Congrats on this HM in the contest. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:11:00 AM
A fine win!
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Date: 5/20/2011 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Kacey. I think I saw a movie once that referred to an African cat as a Ghost. That is a good description of one!
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem Kacey.Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:47:00 PM
Thank you everyone who likes my poem.I feel very humble about my win...YAY! I feel I really felt this one....Kacey
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:16:00 PM
round of big cheers for your win, kacey!:) hugggs
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congrats Kacey on your great win in the animal contest my friend..with this awesome entry ..enjoy your 5th place luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:11:00 PM
Oooh, you really capture the spirit of the panther in your poem, Kacey. Like the way you wrote it in first-person, too. Congratulations on your win in Kirsten's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of kristen, kacey
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:57:00 PM
this is awesome, good job congrats on your win. cory
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