Paulette - 2

Put on your hat Paulette, put on your dress, Put on your red shoes, happily dance away. Light fires of joy, put out all of your stress. Put on your hat Paulette, put on your dress, wear your dreams and smiles, take this life as a bless. Make your life a meaningful lovely ballet ! Put on your hat Paulette, put on your dress, Put on your red shoes, happily dance away. (01/08/2022) *'Paulette - 2' Contest * Sponsor Julia Ward * about a character called Paulette as long as it is not a sad write. (I think, mine is happily bright!)

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/13/2022 9:17:00 AM

Very nice triolet! Best of luck in the contest!

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/13/2022 10:50:00 AM

ha ha ha! not a chance! but many thanks!

Bill Baker

Date: 1/10/2022 5:30:00 PM

Nice Triolet, Marshall. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day, Bill

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/11/2022 3:36:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Blake! Same to you. - Marshall

Douglas Brown

Date: 1/9/2022 10:47:00 AM

Lovely poem Marshall! And thank you for your comment on my poem "The Song". Much appreciated.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/9/2022 11:02:00 AM

Not so much! No, pleasure was all mine to read your beautifully constructed poetry, Dear Poet Douglas. Thanks - Marshall

Millard Lowe

Date: 1/9/2022 9:16:00 AM

Merci, Marshall. Love the beautiful imaging and rhythmic rhyming flow of this triolet. Great share. Shukran. ONE. Peace and Love.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/9/2022 11:00:00 AM

Shukran to you also, Millard! Yes ONE ....Love all over the world, just like Marley sang and yes, peace! that's the heavenly key of life! Thanks - Marshall.

Valsa George

Date: 1/8/2022 7:56:00 PM

Paulette stands before me as a live character full of cheer and gaiety ready to get dressed and dance on her toes. Best of luck in the contest friend !

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/9/2022 10:57:00 AM

Yeah! i don't stand a chance! Grateful for your kind comment, Dear Poet Valsa! Thanks - Marshall

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/8/2022 1:29:00 PM

I love how upbeat your verse is! Can almost see these items (hat, dress, red shoes) being passed to Paulette…you’ve made her a star.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/8/2022 2:41:00 PM

Nothing compared to your Paulette! So Poetic! Really appreciate your comment.