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Patriotic People

Patriots we are Ashen through war To a more promising today. Ruminant mammals as warlords Insinuates the future of glory to come. Open to emigration from across waters Today is our day Significant to determine a stronger unity. People of the United States of America Educate your minds innately. Our focus is for greatness in a better way. Plausibility is our qualifying state. Love, peace, and harmony are what we search for nowadays. Equanimity is our religious situation. P eople of unity A ssemble as one T o form a greater purpose. R ebels for a cause I s not a threat to others O nly a stronger walk. T his is our country. I deals are now. C ome patriotisms unto the clouds to celebrate. P arade so grandiose E njoyed by all O stentatious vainglorious P raise triumphant L ong live the USA. E nvision events that fulfills our people and our states. ________________________| PENNED ON JUNE 30, 2014!

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2015 5:43:00 AM

two for the price of one Verlena great pens congrats on win hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 2:27:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Verlena! Brilliant work!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 4:45:00 PM

fabulous acrostic Verlena - a lovely patriotic poem - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:32:00 PM

Verlena, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/1/2014 5:51:00 PM

I admire how you take command of the language Verlena. Many gifted writers remain intimidated by the spirit and grammar of lettered language, you have clearly achieved mastery of words, and create inspiring, original harmony of concept and vision in your work. There is a magnificent legal and moral paradox in this poem. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/1/2014 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Justin... The 4th July puts us all in patriotic mood... Have good one... Verlena

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/1/2014 4:45:00 PM

This poem is very appropriate with Independence Day coming up, just around the corner! You truly captured the pride that we, Americans, have in our country. Great work, Verlena! I hope you and your family have a Happy 4th of July!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/1/2014 5:33:00 PM

Thanks Kelly for your supportive remarks... Verlena

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/1/2014 12:47:00 PM

Well done! Happy 4th.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/1/2014 12:50:00 PM

Thanks M.L. and the same to you... Verlena

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/1/2014 7:28:00 AM

Acrostic is by far my favorite form so naturally I had to read yours. You certainly hit a home run here my friend! Good work..:JP)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/1/2014 12:05:00 PM

Thanks Jared for your supportive remarks... Verlena