Patricia

Patricia dawdled through the breakfast Mom got angry, sent her to Belfast There she learnt how to run And how to eat a bun And returned with the bread crumbs amassed

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 7:57:00 PM

I enjoyed this one~

Joseph May

Date: 1/2/2015 9:30:00 AM

Very nice limerick Rajat....best wishes

Eve Roper

Date: 1/1/2015 11:12:00 AM

7, my friend, I hope those buns were a Hamburg’s, they are my favorite, my husband gets mad at me for eating them at my age he says it is ruining my cholesterol. Blessings

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/1/2015 11:30:00 AM

Eve you should be moderate in taking such stuff. Your husband is right. He wants your wellbeing.So indulge a craving but with a bit of caution.cholesterol gathering is not a good idea.Wish you in best of health in 2015.Love Dear -rajat