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Patriarchy

He ruled his kingdom with an iron fist all looked up to the earl of otherworld. Women sighed over his handsome face, his manly stature and his sense of humour. His heir and son was cultivated and charming. Yet the earl's wife was a fiery woman of red hair with an hourglass figure she tempted and teased. He was putty in her hands when she flirted. His warriors would follow him to certain death such was their trust in his leadership and skills. His earldom was both strong and rich in arts, jewels with bounteous harvests of fruit and grains. His once many enemies were now scattered and few. He gazed out over his kingdom and knew with certainty that all was ready for the day he was no more that his son would carry on capably in his footsteps. He knew he would be remembered with relevance that many would mourn his Rite of Passage after all he was the patrician all he beheld and he ruled all with wisdom and strength. written 07/17/2015 contest Patriarchy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/2/2015 10:48:00 PM
Superb write Shadow that's so worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:04:00 PM
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Date: 8/2/2015 12:06:00 AM
Shadow, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:04:00 PM
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:44:00 AM
I agree with Andrea, this is very original.
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:04:00 PM
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:39:00 PM
I am just now seeing the note you left me. Why ever would you not consider entering this one?? It is so original, Shadow.
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Date: 7/27/2015 5:18:00 AM
ty Andrea I was not totally happy with it hugs
Date: 7/24/2015 10:39:00 AM
Love this, Shadow. a wonderful flow of words, and so very interesting to read..good luck
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:38:00 PM
ty Harry appreciated hugs
Date: 7/24/2015 10:06:00 AM
I like your take on the contest, great story telling!
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:37:00 PM
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:48:00 PM
wow, Shadow, I love the way that you did yours on a positive note. This is one of the nicest and most interesting of the ones that I have seen on this topic. Hope it places high!
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Date: 7/24/2015 6:50:00 AM
ty Andrea good to know you like it I was unsure about it and nearly did not enter it hugs
Date: 7/23/2015 10:01:00 PM
Shadow, you have penned an outstanding poem, well done 7 and I want to thank you so much for my fine placement in your ACBEC.... contest, I am very honored
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Date: 7/24/2015 6:49:00 AM
ty Connie you earned your place hugs
Date: 7/23/2015 1:18:00 AM
Great story. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 7/24/2015 6:46:00 AM
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Date: 7/17/2015 2:21:00 PM
Lovely story with great imagery Shadow - good luck in the contest - this is the first poem I've managed to see for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2015 8:57:00 AM
ty Jan hugs

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