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As I sit watching fusions of saffron and scarlet hues elegantly charm the horizons. Silently, fluffy lush clouds float by like a magnetic field drawing me closer, in hope they may lead me to you. So I ponder maybe love is like the sunrise so many see it - yet so few feel it. Just the thought of my beloved, leads to these poetic fingers bleeding. As they drown in an abundance of words, that can only be soothed by her luscious lips. For these sentimental eyes yearn to caress her tender skin. So, I set upon the path to discover, if it shall lead to the realms of my lover. A path that I have once trodden upon before, but the soul demands to travel upon it once more. After all I'm only human, the love she planted in my heart still remains and how can I love another, when the heart refuses to give permission. Time has kept us apart. I float to her like a butterfly, and shall float until I reach her province. For this not just an infatuated sensation, you may hear in a fairy tale or sung in a lullaby. Her love is the only sensation of infatuation, as she holds the formula to my alchemist heart. I know I can't simply take her heart, it can only be given to one. But without her the world is cold, and I live for the day she will wrap me up inside her heart and never let me leave. For the love she gave, is still the only one I crave. I long to walk together amongst bluebells and ambrosial roses, roaming through an oasis of enchanted blossoms. Her arms will become my sanctuary. To create a masterpiece of serenity, to achieve an eternal state of tranquillity. I hope before first site of twilight, her perfect vision brings justice to this write. In a world full of expectations, I may lose the passion to exist. Just one beautiful gesture, will help me to remember how to smile. For, I know her radiant eyes will provide clarity, the warmth of her kiss will be my remedy. The Silent One 8 November 2017 Simple Musings.

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Date: 11/19/2020 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful beautiful poem. So many see it but so few feel it...Amen
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Date: 11/19/2020 1:09:00 AM
great write; thought provoking also
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Date: 6/22/2020 4:42:00 PM
I am glad I read this poem tonight while listening to a soft melody. The music and your soothing words melt to create a symphony for me. A healing effect on loop as I read them over again and absorb them slowly. Glad to read this one from you :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 5:33:00 PM
My goodness, I have just found another of one of your very best poems. This is really gorgeous, Silent One!! Very emotive too.
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Date: 11/19/2017 4:46:00 PM
And how can I love another, When the heart refuses to give permission... And like this your elegancy of using the voices of heart and soul flow parallel when you write.
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:33:00 AM
Imbued in love, this magnificent write of yours. So romantic! A fav!
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Date: 11/13/2017 12:13:00 PM
Sigh...This is beautiful..Extremely romantic...Deeply moving.I am touched .A fave
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:58:00 PM
Silent One, the loving impassioned plea of a passionate poet... beautifully written sentiments of deep love and longing; 'Just one beautiful gesture, will help me to remember how to smile' - a palpable sense of yearning poignancy is conveyed with your skilled and talented pen that feels soulful and true. Excellent and enjoyed so much!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/10/2017 5:27:00 PM
I love it when the words just flow, and I feel like I can't write fast enough... though it still takes me much longer than 50 minutes to finish a poem lol!
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thank you once again..I wrote this one in about 50 mins... the words just flowed..
Date: 11/9/2017 5:00:00 PM
Fabulous! I have never read something on this site as beautiful as this fine masterpiece. The descriptions and sentiments are breathtaking. Your images flow in harmony. Very picturesque as well. Magnificent! I will come back and read this again and again. The longing...just one beautiful gesture, will help me to remember....wow!
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, I am sure there are a lot of poems so much better than this simple musing...
Date: 11/9/2017 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful expression of love and longing, SO. Only a heart full of love can write with such depth
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..
Date: 11/9/2017 4:47:00 AM
why do I feel the same way and it's so true when you said that maybe love is like the sunrise, so many people see it....but very few feel it. I love that line, this is great dear SO, thank you for sharing!!!! :) luloooooooo
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 4:35:00 PM
I think all lovers feel the same.. Thank you Lulloooo
Date: 11/8/2017 8:17:00 PM
It's breathtaking!! Beautiful I absolutely love! Hello Silent One, I sure had to come and see what you have been doing ;) and as ALWAYS, my top fave :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Akkina..
Date: 11/8/2017 7:38:00 PM
Wow Si, what can I say about this poem that hasn't been said already? Except, if I had to describe it in one word I would pick "Exquisite"!! Poetry runs in your veins my dear friend. You were born to write. You have your own unique style. a true Wordsmith . Bravo and a fave...Maria
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Maria...
Date: 11/8/2017 5:31:00 PM
I've heardit said, "to love is better than to not loved at all." Carry on.
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/8/2017 1:57:00 PM
an explosion of love's true expression... what a beauty, S O.. huggs
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 11/8/2017 1:38:00 PM
All I can say is "Stunning ", Silent One. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/8/2017 1:12:00 PM
This is breath taking. A true representation of love. It gives me something to be inspired by and to enjoy reading...:)
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Sydney..
Date: 11/8/2017 1:08:00 PM
Such an escape when reading your poems. This one is very deeply written towards a love once lost to transform anew it sounds like. I am just interpreting my point of view at this time of soul seeking. Loved this one because I lost myself in the want to be within the poetic love story.
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you...Guess thats the beauty of poetry...
Date: 11/8/2017 10:48:00 AM
It is worth the journey no matter how long. Never give up Poet, never. Such a beautiful mind deserves to be loved in return. Great words!
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thank you... no one should ever give up..
Date: 11/8/2017 9:04:00 AM
My goodness ... you've really outdone yourself with this one, Silent One. This is a masterpiece that only true love could inspire.
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Becca
Date: 11/8/2017 8:46:00 AM
Wow, I certainly wish someone would write such powerful and passionate words for me someday!! The thing is that I fully understand your beautiful words. I love love !!
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 4:19:00 PM
I hope someone does Mike... Thanks..
Date: 11/8/2017 8:05:00 AM
A page from the Poet's heart. A gorgeous penning. <3
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Maureen...
Date: 11/8/2017 8:01:00 AM
Words so special, eloquently painted--heavenly pathway to love! Brilliant, Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 11/8/2017 7:33:00 AM
Wow!!! I do not even have words to describe the beauty and emotion created by your writing!!! This is absolutely brilliant! My new favorite!!! ~ Judy
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Judy..
Date: 11/8/2017 7:32:00 AM
This is a very beautiful write, so full of the emotion of LOVE, and the feel of it surpasses any simple gestures of love, into the grandness of the desire for the perfect heart to bring you peace and joy through the only part in the world...her love! "For the love she gave, is the only one I crave/.../roaming through an oasis of enchanted blossoms," those lines are so awesome! The internal rhyme of the first line there is done masterfully, and the allusion of the second line is exceptional! GW!!
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Silent One
Date: 11/8/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback..
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