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Pathetic Stew

What if all I wrote was rot would anybody care one jot. What if all I spelt was rong would this detract from poet's song. What if grammer too was flawed would my writings come outlawed. What if every theme I spoke gave rise to thoughts that made you choke. Would this detract from all I do when writing such pathetic stew. Or would you find it all just fine if cloaked in rhythm and in rhyme. Ivor G Davies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/8/2015 6:20:00 PM
I write for one person and that is me Ivor - thankfully most people seem to like what I write and if I read a poem I think is 'rot' i simply don't comment:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/8/2015 5:37:00 PM
I think you should write what ever you feel. Thank you for your poem.
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