Pathetic Man

Sad pathetic man Separated from God above Longing, unfilled

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James Fraser

Date: 8/17/2009 10:33:00 AM

Nice write Sara>>James

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/17/2009 10:16:00 AM

Sara~I'm sure this message what hit many people sharing in those feelings! Well done God is waiting for him! Laura :0)

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 8/17/2009 7:08:00 AM

As much as I'd love to let it slide, I can't eally this time Sara. your sad pathetic man is just as separated from God as you and I are. Anyone who still holds fear and hate in their hearts don't know God. I hate to be so blunt but there really is no way around this. we're all in this together, no man or woman is more or less sad and pathetic then all the rest. I do understand if you're targeting someone specifically, not the entire opposite sex...

Diane Christian

Date: 8/17/2009 7:03:00 AM

aww but God loves all people so this man would not be seperated from God totaly , but a good write, we all fall short of God's Glory but we all are a work in progress, this man will do just fine with God's help, pray for him, God bless from diane

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/17/2009 4:06:00 AM

whenever you are separated from God it can be a sad experience..good work.

Steve Malebranche

Date: 8/17/2009 3:54:00 AM

This is very true...once we seperate ourselves from God, we are only setting up ourselves for failure...Beautiful piece

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/17/2009 3:47:00 AM

wow... I'm gonna pray for this guy... chech out my recent writing! its about painting and so on.... it explains our moods and colors.. enjoy your day!:)