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Pathetic Life

Adorned in scabs and faded scars You swore you’d never let it go this far And friends aren’t who they say they are in this pathetic life You haven’t eaten, haven’t slept The clothes you wear are all that’s left Your other stuff - you lost to theft and this pathetic life Steal from family just the same dishonesty’s your middle name and all the pawn shops know your game in this pathetic life A hopeful end you swear you’re done Oh look! Here comes another one You’ll do just ONE MORE HIT for fun in this pathetic life Your time’s run out your needle’s bent Your friends have left, your money’s spent Your dope was your own detriment in this pathetic life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/21/2017 12:58:00 PM
wow what an incredible poem. I can feel the emotions in this.
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Date: 3/21/2017 10:26:00 AM
Hello Gayle, nice to meet you.This guy in your poem really had a pathetic life. A 7 for you.
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Date: 3/21/2017 8:54:00 AM
Poignant write. xomo 7
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