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Written: May 13, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We saunter, obsessed, under the alabaster, In gloomy hours, a melodic whisper fills the air. The setting sun whispers a story of twilight, Lake's ethereal stillness reflects the soul.    A symphony of feelings, a rhythm of the soul, As the moon scintilla adorns night with gold. A night where truths and dreams intertwine, A sempiternal sky whispered a lullaby.   We find solace in the stillness of night, A tranquil respite amid life's fraught storm. A swath of serene silence, an alabaster sky, An opportunity to inhale, to sense, to sway.   Water is a reflection of our inner musings, It is a mirror of starry night's fascination. A fleeting glimpse, an ember of honesty, We are alone in the silence of night.   So let us stroll, engulfed in alabaster. Night dimness softly murmurs and exhales. We find our solace in stillness of night. In azure waters, our most sincere beings.

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Date: 5/14/2024 5:43:00 AM
Much delight you convey my friend: --In gloomy hours, a melodic whisper fills the air. The setting sun whispers a story of twilight, Lake's ethereal stillness reflects the soul==beautiful descriptions, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/13/2024 3:33:00 PM
exquisite poem with such artistic beauty. I found your poem captivating as it delved into the path, the journey, with wonderful imagery. Your words brought me peace and tranquility. I especially liked "Water is a reflection of our inner musings," as well as "Night dimness softly murmurs and exhales. We find our solace in stillness of night." I agree...we can find our authentic selves (most sincere beings) amidst the silence of the night. Wishing you a pleasant evening,your poetess friend, Sara
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Date: 5/13/2024 12:15:00 PM
We are alone in the silence of night. Beautiful setting, an ideal time to reflect on where we stand and complete one's journey. Great introspection.
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Date: 5/13/2024 10:05:00 AM
SP, you very artistically show that we have times alone and it's great to take it all in and think about where we're at! Love it!!! Let us stroll and find our solace....hey it's not so easy to do, but it's worth it!
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