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Path

yet stagger up the narrow path, incite just love no hatred cast, darkness can deny the truth, stay focused on the light, do it, aloof there of the dark.
Don

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/14/2011 11:47:00 AM
Hi Don, I love this so powerful, hugs
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Date: 11/14/2011 11:46:00 AM
I sense the awesome, creative, and well sensitive mood within your write! This is a very well spoken poem! I hope no darkness carries over to this path, it's cloudy characteristics can ruin the mood!! Great work!!
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Date: 11/14/2011 4:40:00 AM
For in the light stand the righteous. And in the shade stand the Methodists. Tony
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