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Pastel

Pastel colors upon the edge As the sun breaks away the night, crickets and katydids still entertain the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/30/2014 11:20:00 PM
a sweet picture of the edge of day. Lovely, Sara.
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Date: 8/30/2014 1:52:00 PM
short and sweet rhyme Sara:-) I had to discover what a katydids was - and now I know:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2014 11:21:00 PM
haha, you never knew katydid. It's a funny name, isn't it?
Date: 8/30/2014 1:24:00 PM
Colorful write Sara! Expressive though short,, great work!
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Beautiful colors in a beautiful short poem, Sara - Lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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