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Past the Pane

Past the pane, the newly-risen sun Embodies hopes to rise, to peak, to wane, And here within, the music has begun: Fearful, aggressive songs of despair and pain. And on my mind’s horizon swarm The strange possessors of my form, A-bustle to the rhythm of the sounds that sting my soul. And, as I gaze into the blue beyond, The universal of my heart’s pursuit, I call to God and pray my echoing voice… But ah! my voice is mute.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/17/2014 6:28:00 PM
Like your poem, and your double meaning of "Pane." Very deep and meaningful thoughts. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. - Gail
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:59:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Nicholas- I choose your very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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