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Past My Heyday

For fifty years I went to work Minimum wage; was I a jerk I'd slave away every day Bus ride home, eat, hit the hay Now a new life has opened up for me Doing something I can hardly believe Waking up, I go outside; gaze at the grass, sky and trees Thus fortified, I head back in and write poetry It'll never pay the bills, but there are no bills to pay Only one complaint ~ I keep on hitting the hay

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Date: 2/26/2023 12:51:00 AM
Good habits are hard to break my friend don't hit the hay pitch fork it out and get yourself a nice Tempur-pedic and no more hitting just relaxing and sleeping...lol
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:55:00 PM
Struggle is part of everyman's life. Now you can relax thinking how well you have crossed the hurdles of life. Based on your experiences, you can write poems and enjoy. Though life has never been smooth, aren't we much better off compared to the really struggling majority?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/26/2023 7:18:00 PM
Whoa?! Too philosophical for me here. Every day another struggle for this Chicagoan...
Date: 2/22/2023 2:05:00 PM
ha! don't we all, gershon? keep on keeping on...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/22/2023 6:31:00 PM
Depends on how often we hit that hay. ...
Date: 2/22/2023 1:20:00 PM
No energy left for you to play It's cruel that you need"To Hit The Hay."
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:31:00 PM
That's right, Shirley. The energy just isn't there anymore...
Date: 2/22/2023 8:56:00 AM
Hey, hey, hey keep on writing away!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/22/2023 6:38:00 PM
Hey, hey. It's almost Opening Day!

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