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Past Loves

Past loves were a warm fall wind that came and went with time. Where memories served to bring them back and failure seemed a crime. Their moments brief to take you there in pictures full of sorrow. Where feelings come in very strong to help you through tomorrow. Where time exchanges bad for good and lies are colored grey. And truth is faith you did it right where there's no other way. Just stutters to your present life where future comes with force. Till someday time will be as one and living less off-course.

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Date: 6/14/2017 1:51:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, remember no matter how hard we tried but no one can ever forget his/her first love, you remember and miss it all your life if you didn t get it, and all of thid is natural, their s no way to describe why you re affected to your first love so much as compared to others however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 10/18/2016 1:49:00 PM
Your first line hooked me and brought me to a place of melancholy ~ bittersweet.
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 10/18/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Phil. We all need a Fall wind. Trevor

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