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Past and Present

PAST: More time to spare More words to share More thoughts to bare... less distractions in the air ! PRESENT: Less time to spend Less words to send Less thoughts transcend... distractions without end !

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/14/2014 10:43:00 AM

Well thought out poem Donna. Nice!

Donna Mceleny
Date: 10/14/2014 10:58:00 AM

thank you, Brenda...was thinking of my grown up children...everyone is so busy and time spent with them is precious in contrast to when they were younger and we were able to spend a lot of time together

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/14/2014 10:33:00 AM

Future,no time to spend as all time spent. Very thoughtful!