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Passion's Day

With a force Yet not forceful I find her, Taking her in embrace As my arms pull her tighter Into my body Where there she feels The pulsating rhythm of my heart Together, there is no better As an exchange of looks Ignites a passion that has started Through the many words already shared Her skin, Is just as imagined, soft, scented Her eyes are even more beautiful than thought Her hair, too, is scented with an inviting fragrance As her neck becomes the victim of my first assault For upon it, my lips softly peck, breathing through Heating the very nape, hearing then a whimper Was it me? Was it her? Matters not, as tomorrow has finally arrived

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2009 5:48:00 PM
Very passionate and a wonderful write, I enjoyed this very much.......Aleera
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Date: 3/5/2009 10:49:00 AM
Amazing job, truely wonderful. This may be one of my favorites xD Keep it up, you do beautiful work. ~Jese PS. I have to say, I read one of them, and i had to continue, nice work.
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Date: 3/5/2009 5:01:00 AM
wonderful right--but look at the designed created by your words looks like a fat old chick-- or a fat old man
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:59:00 AM
Whoa Michael such a wonderfully passionate write. I love the format as well.
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