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Passionately Yours,

Passionately Yours Hills of joy we rode ahead, Down the valleys sweet we buoyed; Like river merging ocean, Solace I devoured.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 6:29:00 PM

Hello Mehnaz, stopping by to say hi, and read the dodoitsu poem again. still loving the gallop and swallow of your poem. with passion I hold on tight to your words.. always~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 7:57:00 PM

stopping by to read this one again... my favorite poem of yours so far... thank you for the soup-mail.. it pulled me on to the soup today... always~ LINDA

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 9:15:00 PM

Thank you and lol for coming back.... I am glad you are here. Love n hugs , Linda.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2013 10:04:00 AM

really lovely!

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 9:14:00 PM

Thank you Andrea,

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/29/2012 4:40:00 PM

so much inferred in so few lines..good job! Light & Love

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 9:13:00 PM

Thank You,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 3:15:00 PM

Mehnaz Veetil,, wow... this is a short form... but the best poem I've read all day... and believe me I've read over 100 so far.. many are good and awesome.. but none of them made me fall in love with the image..>LOL< I'm gonna say it~ my favorite image is ... devouring the comfort in the joyful path you are exposing with love... love this... so so much... always~ PD

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/29/2012 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Linda for your lovel comments....thanks for stopping by ....

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2012 6:01:00 AM

this is wonderful poetry, in fact this is beautiful...

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/29/2012 12:29:00 PM

Thank you ,Harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2012 1:52:00 PM

I really like the flow and rhythm to this one..It has a special poetic quality to it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/29/2012 12:36:00 PM

THank you Sara ....