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Passion Unfurled

I must try to be coy I must be demure Traits of a “good girl” Oh, but what is the cure? He’s driving me wild I’m starting to melt Oh heavens, oh me How good his kiss felt I’m going to die I’m feeling so faint My deep craving pounds Does he think I’m a saint? I wish he would hurry I simply can’t wait My burning hunger He MUST satiate HE started this madness HE set me on fire And now HE lingers While I burn with desire The permission he seeks Is there in my eyes My patience wears thin Passion melts my disguise I see his eyes linger On my cherry lips They take in the curve Of voluptuous hips I move in closer Shaken by the thrill But if it takes too long I’ll go in for the kill My need relentless I must take a dare Undoing each clasp My breasts now lie bare This is my moment His passion unfurls I’ll end on this note I’m one happy girl! September 6, 2013 Dr Ram's Contest Passion over Patience

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/8/2013 2:12:00 PM

excellent love it GL in contest Shadow x smile

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 12:53:00 AM

:) Thanks, Shadow! Kind of you! Hugs

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2013 12:04:00 AM

Wow! Great one! The title drew me in, and I couldn't get out even if I wanted to! Very awesome one Eileen. :) Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 12:52:00 AM

WOW! If that isn't the sweetest compliment ever! THAT is the goal of writing! Thank you! I will share this with my students in writing class! HUGS!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/7/2013 12:31:00 PM

Attagirl, Queen of Passion. You've nailed this one real good. Hey, good luck in the contest with this strong entry. Kudos, Happy Girl. Licia (*__*)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:58:00 PM

I'm mad at you!!!! You've been MIA for some time, my dear...How dare you! Thanks for the visit. Queen of Passion...who would have thought! Nailed it, eh? Hmmmmm...HA HA HA...Never mind...won't go there. The happy girl in the poem thanks you! Yes...glad to know I've got the POWER! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/7/2013 12:25:00 PM

Passion unfurled..Passion over patience and you expressed fire so well..Outstanding poem lady..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:27:00 PM

Thanks, my sweet! I always love your visits....

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/6/2013 5:52:00 PM

Subtlety and patience not being your middle names my little Desert Orchid,make this contest perfect for you lol. Your poem is excellent and right on the button. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:28:00 PM

I'm VERY low on patience. I had a pin I'd wear..."Lord give me patience...RIGHT NOW!" Yea...That's me...Yea...more of an open book type...That's me. About contests...whatever! Que Sera sera! What will be, will be. thanks for your post, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/6/2013 5:39:00 PM

Ha ha, it sounds like he should be happy as well.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:47:00 PM

Hmmmmmmmm.....If I'm writing the scenario, or sure....YES! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:47:00 PM

Drats...THAT WAS FOR SURE!

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/6/2013 5:31:00 PM

I must admonish you my dear Eileen! I KNOW the contest is entitled "Passion Over Patience" but I'm an old guy, not sure how strong my old ticker is! Maybe if you write something like this again, you need to warn us, NOT FOR YOUNGSTERS OR HORNY OLD GEEZERS! Guess you're sleeping away at the moment but had to get this off my chest! LOL Hugs, sweet lady... Kenny xoxoxox

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/8/2013 12:03:00 AM

HAHAHAHAH :D

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/7/2013 1:40:00 PM

Yee haw! "I like older men" But there's older and then there's ancient... I fit into the second category I'm afraid! LOL But you've made my heart go all a-flutter! Big huggeroonies my dear sweet Miss Boop! xoxox

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:50:00 PM

Kenny...You are a sweetie pie and I won't have you disparage yourself....YOU ARE NOT AN OLD GEEZER...the other bit...Now I wouldn't know! ;) I'm sure your ticker is JUST FINE, my dear! By the way...EVERYONE who knows me knows I like older men! :) They just have that wonderful quality of being absolutely AMAZING! HUGS!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/6/2013 3:45:00 PM

A VERY ENJOYABLE AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:54:00 PM

Why thank you, Liam...Glad to have this visit from you. Will check you out soon! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/6/2013 1:09:00 PM

ohhh, subtle seducution makes me drool, eileen... enticing, intense work that really pulls me in... :) huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:56:00 PM

Sorry, Nette...I'm not well today, so my brain is sabotaging all my posts! Yes...glad you could connect with this...At one point I thought it was just turning out to be silly and funny instead of seductive....Yea...to move things along...Hit 'em with your best shot! ;) Thanks for the visit and continued support.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2013 12:53:00 PM

I know...once that DAMN comes around...I KNOW I'm on the money! :) Thanks, Becca. I must say...patience isn't a virtue I posses...So, this contest was just up my alley...in this area, no less! ;) Thanks or the visit!

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/6/2013 9:40:00 AM

Holy damn, this was.....deep. Great declaration! Your "subtleties" know no bounds. ;-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/6/2013 10:11:00 AM

OH DRAKE!!! You are so so sweet! ;) I tried to be subtle...but...there was no other way to get the guy to MAKE A MOVE!!! HA HA! :) Thanks!