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Passion

dark room,no light not day,at night soft kisses on my neck gentle leg caress quiet whispers in the dark melting my heart skin on skin chest to chest making love to you is the best i've never felt so beautiful ive never felt so alive everything feels so good i think i might die a noise squeeks out of my mouth a noise ive never heard any other time im silent not a whisper,a whimper,a word but you,you set me free you let me be me chest to chest cheek to cheek all the passion is starting to leak i hold you tight,there's no-one above you whispers both ways softly "i love you" creating a life half of you half of me how in the world can this be? so amazing,so truthful so wonderful and bright i close my eyes remember this night lock it away in my head save it for myself ive never loved so much never ever felt so perfect,so alive so beautiful,i cry and you,just you are all i need all i need is you,just you my chest to your back a kiss on the cheek close my eyes and remember all the things around me how you smell,how you taste wonderful,great how do people cheapen such a beautiful thing? to have something feel this good,this right creating our child,you turn on the light and the last thing you say when i ask you not to is im leaving it on..i need to see you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/27/2013 9:51:00 PM
QUITE TOUCHING ~v~
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Brittany Carroll
Date: 9/17/2013 4:40:00 PM
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Date: 5/4/2012 8:02:00 PM
maybe you should just erase the last two lines. put in something nice and keep it nice and not nasty.
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Brittany Carroll
Date: 5/9/2012 2:55:00 PM
what did i put in that wasnt classy or that was nasty??? all i said was im leaving the light on i need2 see u...explain?? thats
Date: 5/4/2012 7:59:00 PM
those last two lines really showed me how easy it is for a guy to mess up with one line. it just deleted the whole evening.boo hoo for you
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Brittany Carroll
Date: 5/9/2012 2:55:00 PM
no...MADE my night actually...he WANTED to see me

Book: Shattered Sighs