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Passing Away

Now absent from the body he flies toward heavenly abode yon celestial clouds relieved finally from wrenching tubes soothed against ventilator’s aid finally liberated to bask with freedom midst oxygen-abundance once sufficiently sought and fought for. Cleared from cares of this world toward unclouded days' forever his serene goodbye left loved ones with blessed legacy marked by Scripture's pledge: "My God shall supply all your need according to his riches in glory by Christ Jesus."*
*Philippians 4:19 of the King James Bible February 23, 2023 Edited on March 8, 2023 3rd place, "Each passing cloud" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul; judged on 3/18/2023.

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Date: 3/20/2023 7:26:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem about Heaven, Beata! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 3/20/2023 5:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win Beata. Highly emotive, touching write.
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Date: 3/18/2023 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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