Passage

A random walk, yet entropy dictates my course forever downward. Others may curse this inexorable decline yet I embrace it. For in my passing the seeds of new life are sown the cycle goes on.

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece of poetry. Great write! Pandita

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/9/2014 11:02:00 AM

Thanks Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 9:49:00 PM

Nice write on the cycle of life, Aberfoyle. congrats

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/8/2014 10:04:00 PM

Thanks Dr. M

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/8/2014 9:14:00 PM

Well done, a beautifully worded haiku's :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/8/2014 10:03:00 PM

Thanks Casarah

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/8/2014 8:26:00 PM

A fine win with a fine write! Big congrats!!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/8/2014 10:03:00 PM

Thanks Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 6:57:00 PM

very nicely done. Congrats to you.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/8/2014 10:00:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 6:26:00 PM

excellently penned Haiku well done on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/8/2014 7:51:00 PM

Thanks Jan