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Now comes a gale, With it rain and hail. Fail or prevail, Virtuous or derailed. All will be impaled. Those who’ve lived with thorny crowns, Will rejoice to renounce. Those with silver spoons and shining gowns, Will weep and fall down. Those with fate and lived to denounce, Will assume the golden town. While those who’ve hailed false crowns, Await the burning hounds. Though the image pass the storm, To the hearts beat forever unknown. If only the journey be known, One's image never too late to be born.

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Date: 11/17/2023 11:35:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/19/2023 8:16:00 AM
Thanks as-well. Any tips for me on punctuations xD?

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