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Party Girl

Music booming Alcohol consuming Drinking Sinking No longer thinking Popping pills Wasting dollar bills Party going Pot smoking Wild, out of control No one on patrol Acid trips Now she slips Trying to hide the pain She does this all in vain... She thinks it heals the hurt But now she's face down in the dirt All the drinking makes her hurl That's her life as a party girl...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 5:08:00 AM
Your form is rhyme. The road you are on is traveled by many and the results arepretty obvious BUT that doesn't seem to stop us from doing it? It may be a 20's thing? Most pull themsleves out of it...some don't I lost 1 friend to drugs..he went walking on the turnpike on acid. LIGHT & Love
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