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Party - For One

party....for one so many people yelling, drinking - only I hear the clock... 2/23/13

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2014 4:20:00 PM

oh, love this thoughtful, clever write, Susan. Thanks again for the PM - will try holding a contest soon. Have a lovely weekend x

Michael Dom

Date: 4/1/2014 4:04:00 AM

Cindarella momnet? You are going to my fav poets. So there.

Royal Ninja

Date: 4/10/2013 1:07:00 PM

seems as if your waiting for someone and time is passing and still no date?, enjoyed this one Susan, wanted to thank you for your comment on my write Angel Wings, hugs-x, Royal

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2013 4:20:00 PM

love this thoughtful write, Susan - thanks very much - loved the bench contest. Have a great Easter

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2013 1:45:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your Senryu..I would be the one hearing the clock..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/27/2013 1:36:00 PM

Nicely written Susan. Thank you for your interesting contest and for my no. 1 shared win. It was fun. Love, J

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/26/2013 8:32:00 AM

tick tick. Sometimes it seems like I'm the only one not whooping it up. Great poem in a small package.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2013 8:44:00 AM

- A party with much noise ...... well done, B.E.S. - Have a lovely Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2013 1:46:00 AM

yes, this is really good, Susan!!! I'm waiting for more!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2013 3:25:00 PM

hum.... them appointments are making my head twirl. i guess when i'm stuck in a party like that the clock ticks, for me to run like that Cinder, girl, into my own little world... anyways.. I'm way off base... ha ha but aren't we all.... PS... read my comment to you on my latest poem... i thought it was funny...pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2013 12:00:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work this morn..It has left me with questions..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2013 5:21:00 PM

at LAST she puts one up!!! And ME LIKEY!!! You are so good at these down to earth senryu, Susan, and tankas too.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/24/2013 9:31:00 AM

This is a tremendous senryu my friend, I loved reading this awesome poem! What a perfect idea for a piece, Great Work!!