Get Your Premium Membership

Partners

PARTNERS The circus tent is filled tonight. I enter front-door, nerves a-tight Climb uncertain angles and heights Spangles and tights and flashing lights Up, around, fall-defying High trapeze - terrifying Out of reach, smiling twirling, Kept in balance, blonde hair swirling Anxious glance below, and pause, Then climb down to wild applause. Never noticed by the crowd Below in darkness, old man proud His steady focus with anxious up-gaze, Adjusts the ropes, the nets, and main-stays, Tighter, slacker, under me constantly. Applause his signal to go instantly, Leaves by back-door every night, Knowing his job has been done right. Satisfied, content, and all unknown The netman sleeps and dreams alone. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in David Williams's Contest Circus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/20/2012 9:13:00 AM
nice work,KC... congrats on your well--deserved win which is many miles ahead of me, lol:) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2012 4:00:00 PM
2 charming characters for the price of 1!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2012 11:01:00 AM
Very good story and well written - congratulations on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2012 9:14:00 AM
I love the personal flavor you gave this performer....playing, not for the crowd, but for his old man! That of course is how we all feel....wanting acknowledgement from those who know us and love us is worth more than fame and glory! Well done, Sydney!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2012 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2012 4:00:00 AM
Nice poem... and congrats... Terry
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2012 3:27:00 AM
Sydney congrats on your win, loved the whole description you portrayed here..David
Login to Reply
Date: 9/20/2010 4:04:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write on Partners, Sydney
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things