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Parting

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Waves shore-bound break in a calm jade translucence Our time together fades into tranquil eternal bliss

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Michael Tor

Date: 6/14/2023 10:42:00 PM

Robert this is such a clever theme you have written. The time referenced to the tranquil eternal bliss an amazing expression of words. The picture you selected is perfect for your ambiance reflected in your words. A favorite my friend...

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/28/2023 7:21:00 PM

Robert, today I sat beside the seaside. I encountered that beauty, but hadn't been able to relate it with such strong illuminating words as yours. Perfect for the contest.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 3/29/2023 1:55:00 PM

A kindred spirit you are, Wendy. So caught up in nature's grand design and hopefully inspired to write more of your lovely contributions.

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/28/2023 6:40:00 PM

Brilliantly captured, analogy done beautifully, Robert, Bol! Anaya

Robert Gorelick
Date: 3/29/2023 1:57:00 PM

So moved that you appreciated the analogy that I meant it to be received. Thanks, Anaya