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Particles

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Particles

P ulling alike, pushing away opposites
A toms floating, drifting here and there
R eally cool structures as they join
T ogether they form something that's new
I ntegral to each other, being one too lonely
C hanging, growing, then they split apart 
L eaving to start all over with other atoms
E ach with positive or negative charge
S haping, forming, joining, some repelling

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Good one, Shadow. You are focused on particles lately!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    be something else soon and no I don't yet know what lol a dream a word a sentence it can be anything. Sometimes I wake up remembering a poem I wrote in my sleep. ty for reading
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:22:00 AM
    You must have taken some chemistry courses! You have a very pleasant outlook on how things work.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    a little at school. my knowledge of atoms comes from being a radio ham ty again for reading Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 7:39:00 PM
    ty my dearest friend Love Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Excellently crafted my friend.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/6/2013 7:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty my dearest friend Love Shadow x smile