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Part of the Team

I love you I cry
I shout and I scream
Why can't you hear me
We used to be a team

I give you the signs
Let you know this is right
Yet you make not a move
And leave me here this night

Things have been changing
Going down the wrong path
It is blocking our sight
Blocking love's path

But please my love
When you do hear me scream
Please let me know
That you're still a part of this team...

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  1. Date: 11/7/2009 5:19:00 AM
    Are you cheering him on or are you screaming at him? Nicely written on a topic of feeling isolated from the one that you love. Keep writing. Sara