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Part of Me Disappears

Part of me disappears without me knowing Can’t reap a blessed thing no clue what I was sowing North wind nips buds of yesterday icicles freeze every flower that sways The brain desires to work overtime while a haze swirls round ~ ‘Tis not a victimless crime

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/17/2024 7:14:00 PM

Automattic Fav from the wild one!) Qualifies for a POTD….yes, I write long comments because I like to communicate, and I can’t communicate in five words. Outstanding imagery not requiring the use of a dictionary. It takes time to write a poem so I think myself as a human being understands that and I’m not gonna throw you a sentence in return for this work. Are you kidding? You deserve a lot more. Best, Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/17/2024 7:47:00 PM

Dear Wild One, I really, really appreciate your enthusiasm for this write. And, yes, it did take me 'more than five minutes to whip off.' With gratitude, Gershon