Park Bench

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sitting 'pon park bench deep in thought and so alone joined by a lady who sits bradford pears' petals softly fall around like snow upon their laps and joined hands

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 4:25:00 AM

what a soft and subtly romantic poem. It touched my heart. Thanks for your beautiful words. Have a blessed day, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thanks for the blessed day. I could use one of those. I am glad that the poem touched your heart. Your visits add a special touch. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/5/2023 6:26:00 AM

So sweet! A lovely write, sweet Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2023 8:22:00 AM

You are so kind with this comment. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/5/2023 1:48:00 AM

Awwn, this is so beautiful and heartfelt, k love the delicate imagery that you've woven here to represent the melancholy turning to a blossoming ambience "softly fall around like snow upon their laps and joined hands" Ahh, so gorgeous and elegant dear Sara, loved reading this as always, sending love n hugs :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2023 4:05:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya, for the deep interpretation of my lines. I just couldn't let him be alone. Your visits add a special touch. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/5/2023 1:11:00 AM

Lovely pictured. You captured the vision perfectly. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2023 4:04:00 AM

Victor, you add the greatest touch. Thanks for the blessings. Sara

Daisy Meadows

Date: 10/5/2023 12:20:00 AM

This is a lovely poem. Well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2023 4:03:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate the well done. Sara