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Paris Down Under

Paris Down Under I heard the thunder all the kangaroos hid children screamed in fear the witch, her brew asunder I calmed the innocent peace is within my sphere I danced with a Wolfe Birds took a glance at philosophy A druid mumbles give peace a chance I swallowed a lemon said are crazy Sheilas in sanity? Life full of questions answers fly in the wind just remember these wise words ignore the ugly echo's of skeletons in the wind

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Date: 3/29/2023 7:11:00 PM
Oh wow POTD I haven’t seen that in a very long time so although I’m late it’s always better late then never my friend! Great work and to be acknowledged is an honor!;)
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Date: 9/28/2022 7:24:00 PM
A fine read Arthur, will take heed of those wise words. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 9/28/2022 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Robert
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:37:00 AM
WoW! Arthur, You have penned a good poem with a great message. The line “ give peace a chance “ stood out very bold in your well written write. I have always liked your poems. You’re such a gifted writer. Congratulations on getting the poem of day it was well deserved. Have a great day- Alexis
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Date: 9/27/2022 4:32:00 AM
Interesting and imaginative! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/26/2022 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations. These are such a lift to get! Panagiota
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Date: 9/26/2022 1:38:00 PM
Arthur, wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 9/26/2022 12:57:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Arthur -
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Date: 9/26/2022 11:56:00 AM
Enigmatic. Peace certainly needs a chance. Congrats and thanks for the visit.
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Date: 9/26/2022 8:27:00 AM
Congrats!!! I appreciate your figurative language and the detail. Bridget
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Date: 9/26/2022 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Arthur! Enjoy your special day of honor. Bill
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Date: 9/26/2022 7:42:00 AM
Threrats on nuclear war, as people shout for peace, Congrats on POTD Arthur,
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Date: 9/26/2022 6:07:00 AM
Charming poem Arthur. :) Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Linda
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Date: 9/26/2022 5:50:00 AM
Special! Shalom, shalom Mr. Vaso
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Date: 9/26/2022 3:26:00 AM
Arthur, congratulations on POTD, enjoyed!
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Date: 9/26/2022 3:25:00 AM
Arthur, congratulations on your POTD honors, enjoy your day !!
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Date: 9/26/2022 3:19:00 AM
A wonderful writing. Many things are said in a very telling way. Symbolically high. Last stanza concludes all. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2022 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations Arthur on POTD….. Cheers Debx
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Date: 9/25/2022 8:30:00 AM
Did you drink the brew?.I'm sure the Wolfe did.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/25/2022 10:59:00 PM
Well, I will say we sure had an interesting conversation!!! LOL

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