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Parchment Recall

My first paper that I found Simply written from that day: “There’s a secret garden At which I can play” Another great parchment That is written on states: “I feel my life as a frown Casting away doubts Of whether there is any good Knowing my existence Is like I’m hated as a clown” My last real paper That shines in the dark: “Darkness radiates from without The heart cannot survive From the emptiness that it holds Caring for nothing Only the pain can enter As the soul claims No other piece but darkness” The pieces of my life Written down sporadically Encompasses more of my life Than I would ever have guessed Most of the life seen through three Small pieces of enhanced parchment paper Russell Sivey Entrant into Carol’s “Pieces Of Paper…A Poets Heart” contest

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Date: 9/19/2011 10:33:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Russ. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:39:00 PM
congrats on your top win in the contest, profound thoughts and words, well written, love the title! :-)
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:29:00 PM
A very raw poem, congratulations on your first place win. So glad to share the position with you. It's an honour! Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:37:00 AM
CONGRATS RUSSELL ON GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN WITH WONDERFUL WORDS LUV..
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations. Your poem is lovely and worthy to be at the top. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:09:00 PM
Im with you on the paper write, im always telling it like it is tonight, talking bout it does ya good , johnsons always misunderstood, on ya Russell.........
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:09:00 PM
wow,you really took this contest to HEART, russell. Great telling of your three pieces of life's thought. Also,thanks so much for my placement in that lovely haiku contest of yours. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/13/2011 6:53:00 PM
Can I add a fourth piece of paper? That here is a great guy who writes with sensitivity and has questions that need to be answered. Hope this provides some insight. Love, Lizzy
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Date: 9/13/2011 5:33:00 PM
The words written on your parchment are very touching, Russell. I especially love the third one. The emptiness you describe is something to which many of us can relate. I'm sure this will place high in Carol's contest. Having just read her blog, it appears she's getting a lot of entries that don't match the theme. Your entry is a perfect match! Winning wishes for you -- Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:50:00 AM
great write, Rusell
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:02:00 AM
a stunningly beautiful creation Russell and very intense dramatic lines displaying your poetic skills so brilliantly luv..good luck in the contest..
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Date: 9/13/2011 7:55:00 AM
A deep write this. a life on pieces of paper, more common than you think, excellent write
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Date: 9/13/2011 1:42:00 AM
philosphical notes from the heart, russell.. tremendous write! winning wishes with my huggs! :) nette
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