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Paratrooper

nerves fiddle-string taut heavy pack upon his back free fall into fray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/14/2010 4:17:00 PM
You have quite a talent for haikus, Patricia! And I really enjoyed the alliteration in the last line. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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