Paranoid

Blue eyes turn green, Seeing mean tricks; Unseen, chances. Jack Horne for Dana Lynn's Second Hand Emotion contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2012 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations Jack on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/16/2012 9:22:00 PM

Congrats, Jack. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/16/2012 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on you HM ,Jack.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2012 3:49:00 PM

sounds like jealousy! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2012 11:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..Not sure exactly what you wanted one to get from this one..Reads like a good entry..Good luck in contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews of my work..Sara

M.I.A .

Date: 1/14/2012 2:52:00 AM

yes, this is simply interesting. i wonder what you're thinking when you wrote it? good luck on the contest jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2012 6:28:00 PM

There you go again, using simplicity in such a GREAT way for the contests!! Good luck, Jack. You are one clever guy. (I got a kick out of BL's comment. I think those not English might not get the symbolism of green)

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/11/2012 2:05:00 PM

Fascinating write Jack! I would have never thought of linking these together toward "...unseen, chances..." great write! Excellent Work!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/11/2012 1:45:00 PM

Interesting one, where blue eyes turn green. Thanks, bl