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Parallel Emotions-Love and Hate

Parallel Emotions - Love and Hate" between love and hate a fine line separates two emotions para-interlocking devotions easier to love someone hate usurps more energy power inflicts hurt into this tapestry cross lines to emote feelings jagged edges like daggers smoothed and soothed by love sweet love conquers life ultimately. © Harry J Horsman 2012 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love and Hate - The Hate bit If you had not bequeath your love One so pure as a virgin's touch, Heavenly Angel from above This life I desired so much. I would not know now How to hate alone in desolation, Unlucky in love is my fate Condemned to immolation, Memories, alas, do not fade The hostility festers strong This septic wound from cutting blade Belie's a love that proved so wrong. Harry Horsman ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/19/2012 4:18:00 PM

Thank you, Harry, for your kind words and best wishes. I so enjoyed this poem - sad but extremely well written. Most of us get the wrong end of the stick in love at some point in time or another, the only way is to believe that you will find true love if you just keep on trying! Cheers, Maureen

Don Johnson

Date: 1/16/2012 3:55:00 PM

love n the hate the good n the bad, anger resentment not me i'm so glad, great poetry here i read from you two, great stuff i do say, all about sad n blue...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 6:25:00 PM

Yes, I can really feel the contrast coming from both of you. You guys did great together. Big congrats to you, Harry.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/14/2012 5:15:00 PM

wow. both very powerful writes! congratulations on your win :)

M.I.A .

Date: 1/14/2012 3:02:00 AM

awesome write, wonderful collabs!

Janet Vick

Date: 1/13/2012 6:59:00 PM

I agree with nikko about the inputs for each emotion of love and hate... Enjoyed reading. Take care. Janet

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/13/2012 2:19:00 PM

Hi Harry! This is such a good take on love and hate--I enjoyed how you had your inputs for each emotion (that "septic wound" line got to me)- congrats to you and Linda :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2012 12:24:00 PM

sweets and harry.. such a pow-wow team-up!.. congrats; a powerful write that bewitches! :) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2012 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your joint win x

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/13/2012 9:52:00 AM

Both You are genius, worded in own style. Fantastic concept clearly imaged with different colors only. loved both of yours. Thanks, bl

Red Fiery

Date: 1/13/2012 9:36:00 AM

congrats Harry and Linds too...well deserving one !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/13/2012 8:52:00 AM

Congrats Harry on a sweet victory.. so enjoyed writing with u luv..

David Williams

Date: 1/13/2012 8:45:00 AM

Harry and Linda congrats on your win..David

Kash Poet

Date: 1/13/2012 7:35:00 AM

Enjoyed this collab very much harry.Goodluck to both you and Linda.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2012 7:45:00 AM

what an honor for me to collab on this piece with u Harry .. tremendous words for your part to compliment my own.. wishing us good luck ..luv..thankxxpartner..

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/12/2012 5:28:00 AM

The gods diffrenciate virginity while men chaste wives.hate is a god that certianly controls our lives.

David Williams

Date: 1/12/2012 4:06:00 AM

Harry nice collab, here with Linda, you two went for the love/hate as well, reads very well best of luck ..David