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Sickness is the devil himself divining his ill will. It seems his only interest is to see what he can kill. The evil deep inside us all, he uses as a tool. And sneaks around just like a snake awaiting his next fool. One paragraph unto itself. Now on display on Poetry Soup's shelf.

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Date: 4/3/2014 1:05:00 AM
Well it's an awesome paragraph I must say. thank you for reading my words :)
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Date: 5/23/2013 4:34:00 PM
I hope that there is no illness in your family or you..Illness and pain are horrible bedfellowers..Satan seems to use illness to pull Christians down for sure..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 4/25/2013 6:25:00 PM
hey, Robert, a question for you. Sometimes you write such awesome rhyme as you are inspired by the poems of fellow poets at Soup. I am curious. Why don't you draw from that inspiration and do longer poems based on what you began writing in the comments to us? I just loved your funny food rhymes. Why don't you post a poem on it?
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Date: 4/25/2013 10:52:00 AM
very visual, and yes profound too, the impact is amazing..
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Date: 4/24/2013 11:10:00 PM
nice and to the point ;}
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Date: 4/24/2013 1:12:00 PM
Strong words and so right !!! Excellent paragraph for poetry soups shelf. Hope you are doing well.... I think Spring has arrived here, with still some cool days and nights. Hope you've thawed some !!
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Date: 4/24/2013 1:15:00 AM
wow, this is a short one, but it's very strong what it is saying!! Thanks for posting up this new poem, robert and for your several wonderful comments on my poems today. Luv, Andrea
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