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Paradoxical Premise

Stands on the land of heterodox Who's the mightiest God of all? People live and die on their equivocation thoughts Those who exclaimed about the God who never fall Inversely proportional to what they always do Who's the mightiest God of all? Seekers, believers, heathens and philosophers with their point of view All still seeks for the truth and uphold one they call peace Inversely proportional to what they always do Compiling the ideas piece by piece Who are we without all these idealism? All still seeks for the truth and uphold one they call peace At the end world leads to anarchism They failed to adhere what they create Who are we without all these idealism? The idea of God and religion become skeptical trait They failed to adhere what they create Stands on the land of heterodox People live and die on their equivocation thoughts *This poem inspired by the contest that held by Richard Lamoureux, which I failed to join, but somehow I come up with this idea. Thank you for the inspiration :D.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/1/2015 10:25:00 AM

I enjoyed rereading this one Yanny! This is full of thoughts worth pondering.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/1/2015 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Rick, this was inspired by your contest. Though at first I tried to answer the challanging stanza that you offered, but somehow, I couldn't. My religious side was yet not in such kind of level. I was still not confident enough to reassure the non-believers about the concept of The Almighty. So, I came up with this idea, which is more familiar to me :D

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/27/2015 10:22:00 AM

I think you are the most gifted soul in the whole of Indonesia. You write so well and the words resonate with the reader's thinking...7++!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/29/2015 1:51:00 AM

Really such a great honor and feelings to have this high appreciation and compliment by you Hannington Mumo. Thank you for stopping by and leaving such an encouragement comment in my page :), have a great day! :D hug, Yanny

Michael Dom

Date: 4/7/2015 3:28:00 PM

Long time no read, Yanny, and this one is a paradox alright. Cheers & hugs

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/7/2015 8:25:00 PM

Long time no see Mike! :D glad to see ya around, hope that you have a great day there :D hug, yanny

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/3/2015 6:04:00 PM

This is so beautiful, your message is also so true! Loved this!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/4/2015 2:58:00 AM

Thank you arthur vaso, glad that you like it :D, long time no see, wishing you a blessed Easter, hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/3/2015 7:47:00 AM

I am so impressed Yanny, straight to my favorites. I would have scored this one very high.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/3/2015 8:18:00 AM

Yaayy!! Thank you Rick! You really make my day, hehehe.. Glad to know that you like it, I almost forget to say have a blessed Easter day for you :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2015 4:50:00 AM

- Dear Yanny, this is amazing !!!! - Truly a pleasure to read, and you have "won" in my eyes :) - A Blessed Easter to you and your family :) - big hug from grandma :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/3/2015 7:42:00 AM

Hello grandma from Norway!! :D happy Easter too to you and your beloved :D thank you for stopping by and give such an encouragement comment in this page, your comments always support me to keep writing in poetrysoup even in my tiny minutes :D thank you for all of your support, I will try my best to catch up in my mean time :D, sometimes when I got the idea, it just evaporates in the middle of my hectic time with Ken, so sorry for the long absence